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Winter,
Time for keepin' warm.
Brush the snow off.
This cave, empty.

Winter,
Time to cuddle another,
While others fantasize more.
This cave, lonely.

Too young, for too long
Too old, and far too cold.
None brave enough,
I climb this peak alone.

Someone, save me.
Trapped in an avalanche of bitterness.
We couldn't keep the fire Alive.
Tears freeze to my skin.
Not you, nor her.
Realized dreams.
Like a faded memory.
(Watch me fade away)

Winter,
Time for something new.
Brush the flakes off.
Try something...new?
©2007-2009 ~slayersfall
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Ever wake up feeling this?

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:iconbatousaijin:
winter is a spinster left at the altar of a shotgun wedding, alone...

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fantastic word choice, it's a little cryptic and I like it. I like how the first two stanza's don't really prepare you for the rest of the poem. They seem happier, and then the rest of the poem is a little more twisted and dreary. I especially like your third stanza.
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I really enjoyed this poem. It really struck me as the snow falls down outside. However, I am not a particular fan of the last line. But that might just be me.

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YES!

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Ha, think of the last line as a lustful man seeing a woman pass by, and changing his mind about lonelyness

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I don't believe in love at first sight, I do believe in-fatuation.
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My mood changed several times while in the process of writing it, which contributed to it's progression.

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I don't believe in love at first sight, I do believe in-fatuation.

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